My House Has Been Tossed
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My house has been tossed
Books torn from shelves and scattered
Across the floor, pages torn
Drawers pulled out, emptied, smashed
Contents strewn across th...
5 weeks ago

I favor #3.
ReplyDeleteHow funny, Brenna, #3 is the only one I thought didn't work at all. hehe. 1 and 2 are decent but don't quite click the way a really great sentence does. 4 is hilarious in a not-really-sequitur kind of way. You know, the "wait... what?!"
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